I did my Pathways Level 1 Project 3 on the 20th April 2018. I was a lot more calm when it came to delivery. However, I forgot most of lines and thus, the structure of the speech was messed up when I started speaking. I think I will need to practice more and improve on techniques to remember the lines better.
Here are the feedback given by the evaluator.
- You excelled at: Good delivery and good command of English
- You may want to work on: Practice more as there were many pause filters. Work on structure of the speech to have a bit more opening, body and conclusion.
- To challenge yourself: Suppose to incorporate previous feedback. You should have mentioned previous feedback at the start of the speech.